Go slow!

Sometimes life has a way of slowing us down even though we would rather it didn’t. In actual fact setting up my new computer is taking a lot longer than I thought it would. I journaled consistently through October but it was all horrifically personal – I don’t think I can look back at it.

No wonder I never kept a diary. Then there is my new phone and the old phone and the fact it keeps beeping and seems to take forever to charge up. Oh yes add to that the fact I scraped my car yesterday at Marks & Spencers. I think I actually will claim on my insurance. Don’t want to be driving a hideously disfigured car around the place which is obviously driven by someone who can barely control it. Too too much!

Ah well complaining over, who knows I may yet get on with my current ‘work in progress’ – ‘The Leiston Riddle’. This features:

Maggie and Jake, two teens who inadvertently become involved with a murder investigation headed up by DCI Mike Doggett.

Unveiling Maggie’s connection to the gang (who orchestrated the murder) will open up several intriguing avenues for plot development. Here’s my strategy to explore this revelation in the chapters I am working on at the moment. It is a slow business – writing a novel – although I understand some dash them off. Lucky people!

Maggie’s Backstory: I will begin by delving into Maggie’s backstory to explain how and why she became involved with the gang. This will include her motivations (financial need, emotional vulnerability, peer pressure, seeking protection – to name just a few examples) and the initial circumstances of her involvement.

Internal Conflict: I will highlight Maggie’s internal struggle. She is regretful, fearful and even feeling a sense of loyalty to the gang at times. This conflict will drive her actions and decisions moving forward.

Interaction with Key Characters: I will show how this psychological conflict impacts her relationships with key characters like Mike Doggett. There could be a mix of betrayal, disappointment as well as a renewed determination that helps her out of the situation.

A Critical Task or Dilemma: I will present Maggie with a task or dilemma that tests her loyalty to the gang AND her own moral compass. This will be a turning point for her character, offering the chance for redemption as well as a deeper plunge into the criminal world.

Consequences and Risks: I will explore the consequences of her involvement. This will include being watched or threatened by the gang, putting her loved ones in danger, and having to lie to the police.

Role in the Larger Investigation: I will consider how Maggie’s connection to the gang will advance the larger investigation plot. She will become an informant, albeit a reluctant AND scared one, and her involvement will lead to a major breakthrough in the case. Plucky girl.

Character Development: I will use this as an opportunity for character growth. Maggie’s journey will show resilience, the struggle for redemption, and the complexities of navigating a dangerous situation.

Setting Up Future Plot Points: Maggie’s revelation will set the stage for future plot developments, such as an undercover operation, a rescue mission, or even a dramatic confrontation with the gang leaders.

I will balance the progression of the plot with the emotional and psychological journey of these key characters. This will add depth to the story and (hopefully) keep readers engaged. Let me know what you think in the comments!

I have well and truly written chapter one and re-worked it using a professional editor – I know it is alright. It is just getting the rest of the thing into shape and also deciding the best way to unleash it on the world. Publishing it myself most likely!